Question

目前，許多學(xué)校學(xué)生存在抄襲作業(yè)的現(xiàn)象，現(xiàn)在請你以“My Opinion On Copying Others’ Homework”為題寫一篇短文。

主要原因：1.作業(yè)量大，偏難 2.對功課不感興趣，懶惰 3.完成任務(wù)，取悅老師

個人看法：1.抄襲不對，違反校規(guī) 2.要誠實，勤奮學(xué)習(xí) 3.有困難可以請教老師或同學(xué)

My Opinion On Copying Others’ Homework

It’s known to us all that some students copying others’ homework _______________??????????????????????

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Answer 1

【答案】

??????????????????????????? My Opinion on Copying Others’ Homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework.As students, we have to do plenty of homework both at school and at home, but sometimes we have too much homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons, nor do they work hard. So in order to finish the homework and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.
? In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of the school. We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. If you have trouble doing your homework, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加�?qiáng)作品的可讀性。

【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；例如：too much太多；are interested in 感興趣；in order to為了； instead of代替等等。用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

考點：提綱作文。