Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分15分）
人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見(jiàn). 請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們的不同觀(guān)點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法.

贊成的理由	反對(duì)的理由	你的看法
廣交朋友 可自由表達(dá)思想 利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)	浪費(fèi)時(shí)間 影響學(xué)習(xí) 可能上當(dāng)受騙	?

注意: 1. 文章必須包括表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容.你的看法至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn).
2. 詞數(shù)為120左右.
3. 參考詞匯: 網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友on-line friend(s) 上當(dāng)受騙 to be cheated
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Should students make friends on line? People have different opinions on this. Some students say yes. They express their reasons as follows. Firstly, the Internet can help them make various friends. Secondly, they can express their feelings and thoughts freely. Besides, chatting on line is also helpful for our language study.
However, other students have the opposite view. They have their own reasons. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. In addition, some students get cheated on line.
In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. / From my point of view, making online friends is not a bad thing if we’re careful enough. Anyway, Internet widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge. However, we shouldn’t spend too much time on it and sometimes be careful with the people we chat with. Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us.

這是一篇議論文，第一段贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，第二段是反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友觀(guān)點(diǎn)，第三段是表述作者自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
第一段陳述贊同的理由時(shí)作者用了Firstly, Secondly, they can express their feelings Besides,來(lái)連接，是文章有層次，并且很流暢。
第二段是反對(duì)的人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)和他們的理由，作者沒(méi)有重復(fù)第二段的方法而是用了 in addition來(lái)過(guò)渡。
第三段是作者自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，范文中用In my opinion/ From my point of view來(lái)表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，觀(guān)點(diǎn)明確，還有自己的令人信服的理由。
一篇好的作文要做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，熟練運(yùn)用好的詞組。例如as follows、 a waste of time get cheated、 As for friendship 和widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge.都用了我們學(xué)過(guò)的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)
另外這篇文章里的好句型也是亮點(diǎn)，例如：chatting on line is also helpful for our language study. /They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully/ Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us.熟練正確的使用這些句型能體現(xiàn)考生的水平，也會(huì)給自己的文章加分。