Question

4．假如你是劉嵐，Linda 是兩年前就讀你學(xué)校的交換生，昨天你收到了她的電子郵件．請根據(jù)下面的郵件及提示內(nèi)容，給她回一封郵件．

Dear Liu Lan， Long time no see!How is everything going？I miss you very much．I think you must be more beautiful now．Write and tell me what you look like now． Yours， Linda

提示：1，比以前長高了，更健康了．
2，看電視、玩電腦的時(shí)間少了，學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間多了．
 3，性格變得外向了，交了很多朋友．
要求：1，語句通順，語意連貫．
2，用上所有提示內(nèi)容．
3，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4，70詞左右．

Dear Linda， Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am willing to tell your some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier．I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my study．At the same time，I have been more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I am so happy that I have changed so many! Come to visit me if you are free． Yours， Liu Lan

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games． 我過去花太多的時(shí)間看電視或玩電腦游戲．used to do sth．過去經(jīng)常做某事；spend  doing sth．花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事．
  高分句型二
I am happy I have changed so many!我很高興我改變了這么多！這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I am  happy是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 Dear Linda，
Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am willing to tell you some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier．【要點(diǎn)一，比以前長高了，更健康了】I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games【高分句型一，注意固定詞組的使用】，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my study．【要點(diǎn)二，看電視、玩電腦的時(shí)間少了，學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間多了】At the same time，I have been more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I am  happy  I have changed so many!【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)三，性格變得外向了，交了很多朋友】
Come to visit me if you are free．
Yours，
Liu Lan

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．