Question

學(xué)完了Food and Lifestyle這個(gè)單元后，老師要求同學(xué)們以此為標(biāo)題，寫篇相關(guān)的英語小段文，自我對(duì)照找差距。

注意事項(xiàng)：1．不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和本人真實(shí)姓名。

2．下列表格中的內(nèi)容不得遺漏。

My Food and Lifestyle
Hobby	…	Try to use the following expressions
	Lunch	…	often/always/sometimes/never/seldom .help/give me be good/bad for…
Dinner	…
Sports	…
Sleep Sleep	… …
Plans/needs	…

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Answer 1

I am a middle school student. My hobby is collecting stamps. It brings me a lot of pleasure in my free time.

For breakfast I often have egg and milk. I always have lunch at school. Sometimes I eat beef and vegetables for lunch. Because I think they are good for my health. As for dinner, I eat at home. My mother never cooks fish. She hates the smell like that.

I take some exercise every day. I often play basketball with friends. It helps me keep healthy and strong. I try to sleep 8 hours a day. I plan to read more books later. I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們就“Food and Lifestyle” 寫一篇短文。在表格中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括五部分的內(nèi)容。一是我的愛好；二是一日三餐的食物；三是體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。四是睡眠情況。五是我的計(jì)劃以及需要完善的地方。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者按表格所要求的寫作順序，講述了自己的一些情況，層次清晰表達(dá)到位。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如As for dinner, I eat at home. I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.等。

考點(diǎn)：表格類作文。