Question

回憶一下自己曾經(jīng)度過(guò)的某一個(gè)美好的周末并寫(xiě)一篇短文記錄下來(lái)。當(dāng)時(shí)天氣怎么樣？你是怎樣度過(guò)的？去哪兒了？和誰(shuí)一起去的？都干什么了？要求：語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，語(yǔ)法正確。大約70詞左右。
                                                                                        
                                                                                       
                                                                                          

Answer 1

Last Sunday, it was sunny and I had a great time. In the morning, I got up early. After breakfast I went to the zoo with Bob. We saw a dolphin show. We took some photos there and bought some souvenirs, too. Then, we had some hamburgers for lunch at KFC. We also had some fruit ice cream. After lunch, we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts. Then we went to a bookshop and bought some books. Next, I hung out with Bob in the street. Finally, tired but happy, we took the bus back to school. At the end of the day, we watched a movie about living in the future. 

試題分析：本題是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)所給話題可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文使用了不少短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如had a great time、got up early、took some photos、hung out with Bob、At the end of the day等等。