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16．假如你是李丹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英文寫(xiě)一篇推薦信，推薦王艷同學(xué)當(dāng)選校優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．詞數(shù)：80左右．信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)、
1．王艷，16歲；一個(gè)聰明的女孩
2．學(xué)東西快，數(shù)學(xué)、語(yǔ)文、英語(yǔ)學(xué)得很好．擅長(zhǎng)歷史，對(duì)中國(guó)歷史了解很多．
3．喜愛(ài)體育．籃球打得很好，是�；@球隊(duì)的成員．
4．善良、勇敢，樂(lè)于助人．經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座．經(jīng)常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一塊濕毯子撲滅過(guò)一次火災(zāi)；
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．她學(xué)得很快．她數(shù)學(xué)、中國(guó)和英語(yǔ)學(xué)的好．她擅長(zhǎng)歷史．do well in 在…上做得好，和be good at意思一樣，避免了重復(fù)．
高分句型二
She often helps Uncle Wang carry water她經(jīng)常幫王叔叔提水．help sb  do sth幫助某人做某事．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．【要點(diǎn)一，王艷，16歲；一個(gè)聰明的女孩】She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．【高分句型一，固定詞組的使用】She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．【要點(diǎn)二，學(xué)東西快，數(shù)學(xué)、語(yǔ)文、英語(yǔ)學(xué)得很好．擅長(zhǎng)歷史，對(duì)中國(guó)歷史了解很多】She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．【要點(diǎn)三，喜愛(ài)體育．籃球打得很好，是校籃球隊(duì)的成員．】She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．【高分句型二，注意help sb，do sth．的使用】She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．【要點(diǎn)四，善良、勇敢，樂(lè)于助人．經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座．經(jīng)常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾用一塊濕毯子撲滅過(guò)一次火災(zāi)；】
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan

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