Question

當(dāng)你傷心和遇到困難的時候，你會怎么做呢？請根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。要求：語句通順，條理清晰； 60詞左右。
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Answer 1

Everyone feels sad sometimes, especially when unhappy things happen. It’s important to talk to someone else. He may give you some advice.
When you fail in your exam, you’ll feel sad and worried. But you should be more confident than before. You can go and ask your teacher for help. When you have a fight with your little brother, you should not be angry with him. You may say sorry to him at once because you are older. When you want to make friends with Li Mei but she refuses to accept you, you cannot be disappointed. You’d better be friendly and helpful. You never feel bored to stay with her so that you’ll get on well with her soon. Then she would like to be your friend. Don’t be afraid. Everyone has your trouble at your age. 

試題分析：：這是一篇話題作文，寫寫你傷心和遇到困難的時候，你會怎么做。本題沒有給出具體材料,需要自己先確定寫作內(nèi)容,然后在動筆寫作.選取材料時,注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容.在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合話題可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱可以是單數(shù)第一人稱，也可以是第二人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】在寫書面表達(dá)時首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動詞的形式，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。