Question

4．假如你是某報(bào)社英文專招的編輯Lily，下面是一個(gè)叫孫林的女孩給你發(fā)來的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)，并提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議．
注意：1．郵件中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和校名．
2．詞數(shù)：80字左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Lily． Now I am new here．I can't understand what the teacher says．I am afraid to talk with my classmates in English．The biggest problem for me is that I can't read fast and I even couldn't sleep the night before big exams．Could you give me some advice？ Yours， Sun Lin

Dear Sun Lin
I'm sorry to learn that you are having some problems with your English learning．           ．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 you should try your best to speak English as much as possible．  你應(yīng)該盡可能地多說英語． try one's best to do sth．  盡某人最大努力做某事．
高分句型二
  Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．聽磁帶和看英語電影也可以幫助你．本句Listening to tapes and watching English movies 是動(dòng)名詞做主語．

解答 Dear Sun Lin，
I'm sorry to learn that you are having s ome problems with your English learning．Here is some advice for you．【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】Firstly，you should try your best to speak English as much as possible【高分句型一，注意try one's best to do sth．使用】．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．【高分句型二，注意動(dòng)名詞的使用】Secondly，you should start reading the books that you can understand．Remember not to look up the new words one by one while reading．Thirdly，don't think too much before exams．Listen to some light music the night before exams，and you will feel relaxed．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹自己】
I hope you will feel better soon．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】
Yours，Lily

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．