Question

提示作文 (10分)
請結(jié)合以下材料，以“Great changes in my hometown”為題，寫一篇80個詞左右的短文。

	Road	Food	Clothes	Education	Activities
In the past	narrow	little	few	No chance to go to school	Very few
Nowadays	wide	Have a healthy diet	Many different kinds of clothes	good	More kinds like drawing dancing……

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Answer 1

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試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，通過圖標(biāo)給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，由于內(nèi)容涉及過去現(xiàn)在的變化，尤其要注意時態(tài)的應(yīng)用。
點評：本文屬于敘事類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。