Question

17．初中生活中，你有些什么改變？你是怎樣改變的？請以"How I have changed"為題寫一篇英語小短文，描述你發(fā)生的變化，寫作內容包括：興趣愛好、行為習慣、學習習慣等方面．
要求：1．用英語寫一篇短文，80詞左右．
2．任選兩方面內容．
3．語言流暢書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔．
4．文中不得使用你的真實姓名校名．
How I have changed      ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．
句中"When my English teacher learnt about that"為時間狀語從句，句中短語有："learn about 了解"、"as…as possible  盡可能地…"．這句話意為：當我的英語老師了解到這些，她教我怎么記新單詞并讓我盡可能地多讀短文．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．
句中使用短語有"on the other hand 另一方面"、"too…to…太…而不能…"．這句話意為：另一方面，過去我太虛弱了而不能多做運動．

解答 How I Have Changed
How time flies!Three years has quickly passed．And I have changed a lot during these years．（開篇點題）
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first．When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible．【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English．（學習的變化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past．【高分句型二】But with the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free．And now I can run very fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys．（生活的變化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life．（表達感恩）

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