Question

1．你夢(mèng)想中的學(xué)校是怎樣的？請(qǐng)發(fā)揮你充分的想象力，以My Dream School為題，分別從學(xué)校的大小、建筑、學(xué)科、作業(yè)、活動(dòng)以及老師和學(xué)生等方面來(lái)描述一下你夢(mèng)想中的學(xué)校．不少于70詞．
要求：
1．條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
2．提示內(nèi)容全部體現(xiàn)在文章中；
3．不少于70詞．
My Dream School
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．
句中"that has many kinds of books"在句中做定語(yǔ)從句，修飾"library"．這句話意為：那里將會(huì)有一個(gè)有很多種類書的圖書館．
高分句型二：
I hope I can study in such a school．
句中"I can study in such a school．"在句中做賓語(yǔ)從句，這句話意為：我希望我能在這樣的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)．

解答 My dream school will be big and beautiful with lots of trees and flowers．We will have a great time in such a school．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
There will be some tall buildings and a great playground．It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．【高分句型一】We will be able to read and study in it．The teachers will be kind and friendly．They will play with us after class．There will be more activities for us to enjoy．We will have fewer subjects to learn and less homework to do．Everyone will have a computer in the classroom．We will do our homework on the Internet．（介紹未來(lái)的學(xué)校）
This is what my dream school will be like．I hope I can study in such a school．【高分句型二】（期待未來(lái)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語(yǔ)言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語(yǔ)意通暢．