Question

根據(jù)下面圖片以第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出(15分)

    
I took part in a friend's birthday party in the evening. It rained when I went home. On my way back home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

I took part in a friend's birthday party in the evening. It rained when I went home. On my way back home. I found a wallet. It rained heavily, but I want to find the owner,I think The person must be very anxious, so I'm waiting in the rain for a while,I saw a man come back ,He looked worried. I asked if it is his purse? He said to me it was his , and I handed the wallet to his hands, he was very grateful to me, I said no thanks, this is what I should do, Then I got home, I felt proud of myself. Each of us should help others

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文 。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真觀察圖中的人物，事件，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)圖中內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: On my way back home.在我回家的路上I saw a man come back看見(jiàn)某人做某事see sb do sth, ,牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.