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11．現(xiàn)在越來越多的學(xué)生使用和帶手機(jī)進(jìn)入校園，中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該帶手機(jī)進(jìn)入校園，為此學(xué)生們展開了討論．  贊成意見：1現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì)，手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一．2應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)．如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助．3可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己．
反對(duì)意見：1學(xué)校已提供了公共電話，因此手機(jī)并不能帶來更多的方便，而且花費(fèi)較多．2若課堂接聽手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課．3學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)．4我們要拒絕成為低頭族．stop phubbing 不做低頭族
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  Is mobile good for student？
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．but every coin has two sides．                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If we are in danger by chance，we can use phones to ask for help如果我們偶然處于危險(xiǎn)中，我們能用手機(jī)求助．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
What's more，many students spend so much time in playing games on the phones that they can not listen to teachers well再者，許多學(xué)生花那么多的時(shí)間在手機(jī)上玩游戲以至于不能好好聽講．
so…that從句：如此…以至于．

解答 Is mobile good for student？
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students，but every coin has two sides．a(chǎn)lmost everyone has a mobile phone．However，is it good  for students？
   Some people think it's  good for students to take phones to school．As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information．If we are in danger by chance，we can use phones to ask for help．【高分句型一】What's more，our parents and friends can communicate with us by phones wherever we are．After class，we can play games on phone to relax．（ 贊成意見）
   However，many people are against taking  phones to school，especially teachers．Many teachers think that most of students often send messages by phones during the class．What's more，many students spend so much time in playing games on the phones that they can not listen to teachers well，【高分句型二】it's bad for their study．At the same time，it costs much money．There are public phones in school．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．They should refuse to be phubbers．（反對(duì)意見）
   In my opinion，the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．

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