Question

3．由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)．請你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫一篇60-80詞的短文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立性．

Ways	Things we can do
begin with our own things	打掃我們自己的房間…
help with housework	煮飯…
learn actively	準(zhǔn)時(shí)完成作業(yè)…
think about things by ourselves	獨(dú)自做決定，不依賴被人…

注意：開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
要求句子通順，語法正確，并注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫．
As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent．What should we do to make us independent？First，                       I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds打掃自己的房間鋪床是我們的職責(zé)．
it's+名詞+to do sth 做某事是…it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
【高分句型二】
Don't always depend on others不要總是依賴他人．
depend on 依賴

解答 As middle school students，it's very important for us to be independent．What should we do to make us independent？First，let's begin with our own things．It's our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds．【高分句型一】（做好自己的事情）Second，help with housework．We can help cook or clean the house in our free time．Doing housework shoud learn by ourselves．（做家務(wù)）Third，learn actively．We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time．（積極學(xué)習(xí)）Finally，think about things by ourselves．We sometimes need to make plans or dicisions alone．Don't always depend on others．【高分句型二】（自己做決定）I think if we keep on doing these，we'll become more and more independent．

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．這種形式本身的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，重點(diǎn)也很突出，只要把各個(gè)提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．