Question

假如上周一你班舉行了“愛(ài)護(hù)水、節(jié)約水”的主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道。

活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告；全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛(ài)護(hù)水。
活動(dòng)收獲	我們知道我國(guó)一些地方水源受到污染；我市雖有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(節(jié)水和愛(ài)護(hù)水的方法至少各發(fā)揮一點(diǎn))。
活動(dòng)感受	……

要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80，文章的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
2. 要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；
3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。
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Answer 1

Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.
Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldn’t leave water running after using it. Besides, we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers.
After taking part in the activity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.

試題分析：該題是一篇提綱作文，題目所給信息比較詳細(xì)。在寫(xiě)作前可將這些要點(diǎn)分別翻譯一下，也可根據(jù)話(huà)題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，然后在通過(guò)適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將其串為一篇文章。文章以第一人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)，以過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主。在提建議時(shí)可以使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文段落清晰，語(yǔ)句流暢。