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10．越來(lái)越多的汽車進(jìn)入了我們的家庭，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大危害．作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？
請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100詞左右）
內(nèi)容提示：
1 遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線．
2 別在街道或馬路上玩耍和踢球．
3 勸父母不能酒后駕車．
你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然．
參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑馬線
注：第一段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．
                                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life隨著越來(lái)越多的汽車走進(jìn)我們的家庭，我們很高興它大大改善了我們的生活．這是由with引導(dǎo)的伴隨狀語(yǔ)，意思是"隨著…"，we are happy that是一個(gè)主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句式，后面引導(dǎo)一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句，后面是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示對(duì)現(xiàn)在造成的影響．
高分句型二：For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast例如，我們必須走在一邊，當(dāng)我們過(guò)斑馬線時(shí)，停止，看右，左，然后快速經(jīng)過(guò)．這是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，for example是一個(gè)固定短語(yǔ)，意思是例如．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life（高分句型一）（開門見山說(shuō)明汽車的積極作用）．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents（說(shuō)明汽車帶來(lái)的負(fù)面作用）．
        Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast（高分句型二）．Don't play football on the road．we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving．（具體闡明我們的作法）
        We can say cars are coming into our life，but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safely driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．（總結(jié)全文）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫作時(shí)，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語(yǔ)和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．