Question

 假如你是Lily，是一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生，每天都在為考試而學(xué)。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀下面的圖片，并根據(jù)要求給青少年問(wèn)題專(zhuān)家Abby寫(xiě)一封求助信。

要求：1．結(jié)合圖片寫(xiě)出自己面臨的問(wèn)題（至少?gòu)娜齻�(gè)方面寫(xiě)）；

2．希望得到幫助。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：90左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：

           2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。

Dear Abby,

I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.____________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________

Yours,

Lily

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Abby,

I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.

First, I have so much homework to do every day that I don’t have anytime for my hobbies. Second, I have to stay up late to finish all the exercises, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel sleepy in class the next day. Third. because of not having time for sport and sleep, I often feel tired and stressed. Also I fall ill easily. I don’t know if I can keep on with study. What should I do? I’d like you to give me some advice.

Yours,

Lily

【解析】

試題分析：這是一封看圖作文。主要是寫(xiě)在九年級(jí)所遇到了困難。從圖中我們可以看到一個(gè)女孩在做著一大堆的作業(yè)，由此可聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際感受寫(xiě)下面臨的問(wèn)題。同時(shí)，這是一封求助信，結(jié)尾可要求別人給你提供建議。所以，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意文章的完整性。注意句子的完整性和連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清晰。在寫(xiě)問(wèn)題的時(shí)候，用了first，second，third使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更明了。另外，文章用了很多的短語(yǔ)和句式，如：so…that…如此…以至于…; stay up 熬夜；because of 因?yàn)�；keep on with跟上等等；另外用了一些狀語(yǔ)從句，例如so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句等，使文章更緊湊和流暢。

考點(diǎn)：看圖作文