Question

請(qǐng)以The changes to my hometown為題，寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)你的家鄉(xiāng)在環(huán)境，交通方式等方面的變化，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)這些變化的看法。要求：根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)全要點(diǎn)，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

Answer 1

The changes to my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty.  We could hardly see the blue sky. But now, there are many tall buildings in my  hometown.  The river is clean and the water is clear. There is less pollution than before.
When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportion conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. It took a lot of time. As time goes by , those has changed. TaiZouStation andTaiZou Airport have been in use for several years.There are many ring roads People usually go to work by bus or by train even by plane.
It was hard to keep touch with others in the past. But now we can talk on the phone, we can also surf the Internet to send mails or to chat on line. It is very esay.
Now we live a happy life .To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown . I hope my hometown will be better and better.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求對(duì)比介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意used to 的應(yīng)用。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)全,句式應(yīng)用較多例如It was hard to keep touch with others in the past，To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports等。使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。