Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi)。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的真實校名和姓名。

假如你叫李平，最近和英國朋友Mike通過郵件談?wù)摮砷L過程中對自己產(chǎn)生過重要影響的人，他想了解你生命中最重要的人是誰，請你根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。

提示詞語： helpful, patient, look after, brave, love

To Mike From Li Ping Subject The most important person in my life Hi! Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________ ________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping

 

Answer 1

Hi! Mike,

As for me, the most important person in my life is my mother.

She is caring and helpful. Once I hurt my leg badly and had to stay in bed for three weeks. My mother not only looked after me all the time but also helped me with my lessons. With her help, I recovered very soon.

I have learned a lot from my mother. I decide to be a person like her, who is patient and helpful to others. I’ve also learned to be brave to face any difficulties. I love my mum.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇英語提綱的給材料作文。要求介紹你成長中最重要的人，并說明為什么重要及你從他身上學到了什么。

【亮點說明】這篇短文要點描述清晰條理沒有語言錯誤。多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯如As for me, not only but also，With her help ，I decide to be a person like her, who is patient and helpful to others。使文章更有邏輯，更豐富。

考點：提綱作文。