Question

為了培養(yǎng)同學們的社會責任意識和社會實踐能力，老師要求每個同學關注身邊的社區(qū)并積極參加社區(qū)的社會實踐活動，請根據(jù)所給提示以“The community centre in my neighborhood”為題，寫一篇短文，包括以下要點:
1、我家附近有個社區(qū)，大家感到很幸運；
2、周末，義工、大學生來幫助：幫老人購物、打掃衛(wèi)生，和他們聊天，給他們講故事；輔導孩子們功課；修理壞了的冰箱、自行車等；
3、我打算為社區(qū)（1）……（2）……
注意：（1）要點清楚，語言流暢；（2）字數(shù)100詞左右；
（3）短文須包括所有要點內(nèi)容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。
The community centre in my neighborhood
                                                                  
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Answer 1

The community centre in my neighborhood
I live in a small town.It is very beautiful here.We love it. Luckily there is a community centre in my neighborhood.On weekends some students come to help the old people .They help to do some cleaning ,go shopping,have a chat with the old people and tell them stories.Some help children here with their homework.Some repair broken fridges and bikes.They have a busy weekend,but they are very happy.
I hope to help them on the weekends.I can play games with the old people here.I can make them happy with me.

試題分析：本文是給材料作文，因為這里要寫的是平時的義工是怎樣做的，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時。要注意主謂一致，適當用一些短語和句式。
【亮點說明】本文用了一些短語和句式，增加了短文的色彩如：On weekends some students come to help the old people . Some help children here with their homework. I hope to help them on the weekends等，文中用了一些連詞如：and，but等。提醒學生注意積累一些短語和句式。
考點:提綱作文。