Question

12．請你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一篇短文，向你的朋友們簡述你在學(xué)校一天的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況．    
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．早上：起床，晨練，早餐．
2．上午：上課時(shí)間，節(jié)數(shù)，午餐．
3．下午：上課時(shí)間，節(jié)數(shù)，課后體育活動(dòng)．
4．晚上：讀書，寫作業(yè)，睡覺．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：l00左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
2．所有的要點(diǎn)提示必須涉及，可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容．
3．字跡工整，卷面整潔，語言流暢．
4．不得用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名．
Now let me tell you something about my everyday school life（早上活動(dòng)）In the morning，I get up at 6 o'clock．Then I do some exercise in the garden．After that，I have an egg and a piece of bread for breakfast．（上午活動(dòng)）I have four classes in the morning：math，Chinese，English and P．E..（中午）At noon，we have some vegetables and rice for lunch．And then we have a rest．（下午活動(dòng)）In the afternoon，we have three classes：art music and history．After school，I play sports with my friends．（晚上活動(dòng)）In the evening，I read books and do my homework until 10．And then I go to bed and fall asleep．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇是提綱作文，向你的朋友們簡述你在學(xué)校一天的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況．寫作時(shí)，要把時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、和事件交代清楚；把每天早上、上午、下午和晚上所做的事情寫的要有條理性，可以用第一人稱來寫，因?yàn)槭墙榻B的學(xué)校生活，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)即可，要做到字跡工整，卷面整潔，語言流暢要把文中的要點(diǎn)寫全，做到語句通順，過渡自然連貫．重點(diǎn)短語及句型After that，In the afternoon，we have，After school，do my homework until 10等等

解答 Now let me tell you something about my everyday school life
（早上活動(dòng)）In the morning，I get up at 6 o'clock．Then I do some exercise in the garden．After that，I have an egg and a piece of bread for breakfast．（上午活動(dòng)）I have four classes in the morning：math，Chinese，English and P．E..At noon，we have some vegetables and rice for lunch．And then we have a rest．（下午活動(dòng)）In the afternoon，we have three classes：art music and history．After school，I play sports with my friends．（晚上活動(dòng)）In the evening，I read books and do my homework until 10．And then I go to bed and fall asleep．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是考查書面表達(dá)能力，在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中要加強(qiáng)寫的訓(xùn)練，達(dá)到熟練運(yùn)用的目的，書寫工整，語法準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然連貫．