Question

隨著人口的增長和家庭轎車的普及，交通安全問題已成為千家萬戶關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。作為初中生你是怎樣上學(xué)的呢？是乘公交車、小汽車還是自行車？請根據(jù)提示詞發(fā)揮想象以the advantage of the bicycle為題寫一篇60-80詞短文，開頭已給出（7分）

提示詞：save energy, cause air pollution, park bikes, cost little, a useful sport, be good for health

The bicycle is one of the most important vehicles in the world. In every country people use bicycles for work, for sport or just for fun. As a student, we like going to school by bike. Why is it so popular? ____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The Advantage Of The Bicycle

The bicycle is one of the most important vehicles in the world. In every country people use bicycles for work, for sport or just for fun. As a student, we like going to school by bike. Why is it so popular? First, it can help us save energy. Second, it doesn’t cause air pollution. Third, it’s easy to park bikes . Fourth, it costs little. Then, it’s a useful sport. Finally, it’s good for health. So bicycles are becoming more and more popular all over the world.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇根據(jù)所給要求寫一篇語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范的作文。這就要求仔細(xì)分析所給要求，然后考慮清楚寫作思路。細(xì)節(jié)方面就要注意時(shí)態(tài)，語法以及銜接詞的運(yùn)用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把要求的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，做到了首尾呼應(yīng)，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。

考點(diǎn)：命題式作文