假如你是第二中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生劉星,你要寫(xiě)一封信給青少年專家Sigmund,告訴他你遇到的問(wèn)題,并請(qǐng)求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的信息完成這封信。

姓名

劉星

星座

Gemini

最喜歡的顏色

橙色,因?yàn)槌壬碇鞓?lè)。

個(gè)人特質(zhì)

善良、慷慨、自信,富有創(chuàng)造力

遇到的問(wèn)題

1. 迷戀動(dòng)漫真人秀(cosplay),會(huì)花很多時(shí)間在這上面;

2. 父母對(duì)你不滿意,要求你放棄這個(gè)愛(ài)好;

3. …

目前需求

希望得到建議

注意:1. 短文須包括以上內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫;

2. 不要標(biāo)題;詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右。

Dear Sigmund,

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

                                                         Yours,

                                                         Liu Xing

 

【答案】

 

   My constellation is Gemini。My favorite color is orange  ,because orange stands for happiness.I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds.I am also generous and confident.I am a creative boy.I often think of new jokes to make my friends laugh.

  Though I am a good boy,  I have some problems .I like cosplay very much .I often spend a lot of time on cosplay.But my parents are strict with me,they want me to give up this hobby,because they think it wastes my time.I have no time to study.I like chatting on line,my mother says that is a bad habit.And sometimes I come home too late,my parents are not happy.They aksme to get home on time.I don’t know how to slove these problems.Can you give me some advice?

【解析】

試題分析:根據(jù)題目提示,我們應(yīng)該確定本文的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱;注意描述的順序;注意時(shí)態(tài),人稱和固定詞組搭配,注意連詞的運(yùn)用。注意句子的順暢,應(yīng)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。這是一篇書(shū)信,主意格式及語(yǔ)氣。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中用了許多固定短語(yǔ),如my favorite color,be strict with,have no time to do sth,chat on line;come home too late,hand in,on time,give up等,能夠很好的連接文章。根據(jù)表格,劉星有好的方面也有不好的方面,所以分開(kāi)對(duì)比,效果更好。

考點(diǎn):提綱作文。

 

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