Question

以“My Dream Home”為題來談談自己的夢想家園，80個單詞左右。
我的夢想家園在山腳下。有兩層，房前有一個大花園，種滿了花。
一樓有一個廚房和家庭影院，因為我喜歡…
我的父母住在二樓，我有自己的臥室，我可以…
我最喜歡的地方是……因為……
我愛我的夢想家園。
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Answer 1

My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain.There are two floors .And there is a big garden in front of the house. I like the garden because of having a lot of flowers.
There is a kitchen on the first floor. I like watching moives very much. My parents live on the second floor. I have my own bedroom. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom. I like my studyroom best because reading is my hobby. I can learn a lot when I am reading.
I love my dream home。

試題分析：這是一篇列出提綱的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹我的夢想家園。主要用到第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】這篇短文要點全，幾乎沒有語言錯誤。能夠利用連詞，because,and 等。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain；I like watching moives very much. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom.等。