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8．暑假到來，第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生計劃趁畢業(yè)后的這一段時間外出旅游，好好休息一下．請用英語寫一篇80-100詞左右的調(diào)查報告，說明有關(guān)旅游去向的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并根據(jù)中文提示寫出幾種選擇各自的相關(guān)理由．
相關(guān)提示：
1）大城市可參觀博物館和旅游勝地
2）看望爺爺奶奶并享受美食
3）農(nóng)村可呼吸新鮮空氣并欣賞美麗的大自然
The summer holidays are coming．The students from No.1 Middle School will finish school soon．They are looking forward to a trip to relax themselves．They have done a survey about where they would like to go．
Here is the result．Half of the students hope to go to big cities so that they can visit museums and places of interest．One sixth of them are going to visit their grandparents and eat their favourite foods．The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是說明有關(guān)旅游去向的調(diào)查結(jié)果以及各自的理由．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1）大城市：1/2  可參觀博物館和旅游勝地
2）看望爺爺奶奶  1/6  并享受美食
3）農(nóng)村：1/3 可呼吸新鮮空氣并欣賞美麗的大自然
常用到的重點短語：
look forward to 盼望…
half of…一半
place of interest 名勝
the rest of…剩下的
【高分句型】
1．They are①looking forward to a trip②to relax．
①look forward to 盼望…．to是介詞后加名詞代詞或動名詞
②動詞不定式做目的狀語
2．Half of the students hope to go to big cities①so that they can visit museums and ②places of interest．
①so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
②place of interest 名勝
3．The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．
where作為引導(dǎo)詞的非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞countryside．

解答 The summer holidays are coming．The students from No.1 Middle School will finish school soon．They are looking forward to a trip to relax themselves．【高分句型】They have done a survey about where they would like to go．
Here is the result．Half of the students hope to go to big cities so that they can visit museums and places of interest．【高分句型】（大城市：1/2  可參觀博物館和旅游勝地）One sixth of them are going to visit their grandparents and eat their favourite foods．（看望爺爺奶奶  1/6  并享受美食）The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．【高分句型】（農(nóng)村：1/3 可呼吸新鮮空氣并欣賞美麗的大自然）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全．動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．寫作中注意分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)法，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題．寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．