Question

請(qǐng)以“Proud of My School”為主題寫一份升旗儀式發(fā)言稿。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Proud of My School

Hello! I am happy to stand here to have a speech. The topic of my speech is “Proud of My School”. I hope you will like it.

My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 2,000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis. Sometimes we have class meetings. They are very interesting.

I love my school because it's like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以Proud of My School為題寫一篇作文。我們可以自己列一寫作提綱，主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。一是演講的開場(chǎng)白。二是為學(xué)校感到驕傲的原因。最后是呼應(yīng)開頭，為學(xué)校感到驕傲。。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者將短文分成三段，闡明自己為學(xué)校感到驕傲，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如My school is very big with several tall buildings.I love my school because it's like a big family. We have lots of fun at school.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.等。

考點(diǎn)：話題類作文。