Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分15分)

過(guò)馬路闖紅燈近年來(lái)已成為社會(huì)關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn)話題，請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的一則報(bào)道和圖片。寫(xiě)篇英語(yǔ)小短文，詞數(shù)在100字左右。短文應(yīng)包含以下幾個(gè)方面：

1. 簡(jiǎn)單描述圖片內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勀銓?duì)此類行為的感受或看法。

3. 提出解決此類問(wèn)題的合理建議；

（參考詞匯：run a red light ,be punished, build more footbridges / underpasses, keep orders）

注意：

1、語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。

A Report from People’s Daily

"Chinese style of crossing the road" is a ridicule(調(diào)侃)used by the net friend. It describes a way of some Chinese walking across the road, namely "enough of a person can go（湊夠一撮人就走）, not red light”. Just look at other people and do not see the light. It is generally believed that as long as we cross the road together, no car dares to hit us. Here is one of the excuses given by a pedestrian (行人).

Reporter：You know, you can’t run a red light, can you?

Pedestrian：No, I can’t.

Reporter：But why did you do that just now?

Pedestrian：I am in a hurry. I’ll be late for work.

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Everyone knows rules are made for people to follow, not to break.             

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Rules are made for people to follow, not to break. When people cross roads, they might be in a rush for doing something, so they don’t care about the traffic rules. In this picture, groups of people are going across the road while red lights. The harm for this is that the cars would not expect the people walking across the street while the red light, and may even cause accidents.

There may be different reasons in different people. Probably you would be late. So next time, you’d better go out earlier. Someone may say since there is no car, he can cross the road. But for your safety, please wait a minute. Do not follow the ones who lead themselves to danger! I think everyone should obey the traffic rules At the same time the government had better build more footbridges or underpasses.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料為一幅圖片，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真觀察圖片，了解圖片所蘊(yùn)含的信息。寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)先簡(jiǎn)單描述一下圖片內(nèi)容，及中國(guó)式過(guò)馬路的特點(diǎn)，并分析原因，提出自己的建議。然后列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should后面動(dòng)詞用原形。適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，注意從句的應(yīng)用，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。