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目前，空氣污染嚴(yán)重，經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)霧霾天氣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，介紹有關(guān)霧霾的成因、害處及應(yīng)對(duì)措施，并就如何過(guò)低碳生活以保護(hù)環(huán)境向人們提出合理的建議：

 

霧霾成因：	1.越來(lái)越多的使用小汽車；2.人們使用了大量的煤；3.工廠排放了許多的有害氣體；4.在建造大樓時(shí)，有許多的塵土。等
霧霾 害處：	1.使人容易咳嗽；2.會(huì)導(dǎo)致肺癌。等
應(yīng)對(duì)措施:	1. 盡量不出去；2. 關(guān)好門窗；3. 當(dāng)出去時(shí)，應(yīng)該戴口罩；4. 多吃水果和蔬菜。
合理建議：	就如何保護(hù)環(huán)境，提出自己的看法，不少于2條建議。

 

 

 

 

 

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;

3.詞數(shù)90詞左右。

參考詞匯： hazy weather ( 霧霾天氣 ) haze( 霧霾 ) 煤( coal ) 氣體( gas )

塵( dust ) 咳嗽( cough ) 肺( lung ) 口罩( mask ) 低碳生活( low-carbon life)

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

At present, the air is seriously polluted and the hazy weather often appears. Why? More and more cars are used and plenty of coals are burnt. The factories give out much harmful gas. When many tall buildings are built, there will be much dust in the air. Of course, there are some other reasons.

The hazy weather is harmful. It has a bad effect on people. It may make it easy for people to cough. It may also lead to lung cancer. So we must try to protect ourselves. We should try not to go outside and keep the door and windows closed in such weather. When we go out, we should wear masks. We ought to eat more fruits and vegetables to make ourselves stronger.

How can we improve the quality of the air? We should live a low-carbon life. For example, we can go to work by bike or on foot instead of by car. We should plant more and more trees and other plants. I think the air will become cleaner and cleaner in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，要包括霧霾的成因、害處以及解決辦法，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，給出你的建議。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：at present“目前”； It has a bad effect on people.“對(duì)人類有害處”；try to do sth“盡力做某事”以及動(dòng)詞不定式和復(fù)合句的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。