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目前在學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)中,抄襲作業(yè)是一種普遍現(xiàn)象。上周第十八中學(xué)初二(五)就此現(xiàn)象召開主題班會(huì)。班會(huì)課上,老師和學(xué)生就作業(yè)布置的目的、抄襲作業(yè)的原因以及可能帶來的危害進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的信息,以“My opinion on copying others' Homework”為題談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這一問題的認(rèn)識(shí)和看法,可做適當(dāng)?shù)恼归_,開頭已給出。(詞數(shù)不少于80)

Last week, our class had a warm discussion on copying other's homework.Nowadays, copying others' homework is very common at school.Why do so many students like to copy homework?I think ______________________________

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  Last week, our class had a warm discussion on copying others' homework.Nowadays, copying others' homework is very common at school.Why do so many students like to copy homewok?I think there are many reasons for it.Some students think they have too much homework and they can't finish it all.Some think it is too difficult for them.And others are lazy or don't want to think a lot and they prefer to spend time playing.

  In fact, homework is left for students to make what they learn clearer and better.And also it's important for teachers to know whether their students learn a lot in class.Teachers may also try out new ideas to improve their teaching.

  In my opinion, it's not right to copy others' homework and it breaks school rules.As students, we must be honest and try our best to work hard.The more they copy others' homework, the less interest they will have in what they are learning.I think we could ask teachers or other students for help when we have problems.

  評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):

  一、評(píng)分原則:

  1.本題總分為20分,按五個(gè)檔次給分。

  2.評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,結(jié)合內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá),綜合給定分?jǐn)?shù)。

  3.此題具有一定的開放性,考生可以根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)刪減或發(fā)揮,加入自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  4.詞數(shù)少于80的,從總分中減去1分。

  5.拼寫錯(cuò)誤多,書寫較差以致影響表達(dá),在所確定檔次的分?jǐn)?shù)范圍內(nèi),減去1分。

  一、各檔次的給分范圍和要求:

  第五檔(很好):(20-18分)

  完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),涵蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),或在發(fā)揮時(shí),內(nèi)容有新意或亮點(diǎn);語言基本無誤,行文連貫,表達(dá)清楚。

  第四檔(好):(17-14分)

  完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),涵蓋了基本的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);語言有少量錯(cuò)誤,行文基本連貫,表達(dá)基本清楚。

  第三檔(一般):(13-9分)

  基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),寫出了一些內(nèi)容;語言有一些錯(cuò)誤,行文不夠連貫。

  第二檔(較差):(8-5分)

  未能恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),只能寫出個(gè)別要點(diǎn);語言錯(cuò)誤較多,未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。

  第一檔(差):(4-0分)

  未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),只能寫出與內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞;語言錯(cuò)誤很多,未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。

  注:本卷總分不設(shè)小數(shù),如遇小數(shù),請(qǐng)進(jìn)位。


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