Question

假定你是王偉,你的英國(guó)筆友David來信問及你們學(xué)校在署假期間對(duì)學(xué)生的.要求。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回一封電子郵件。

●家庭安全：小心用火用電,外出時(shí)關(guān)好門窗；
●游泳安全：不獨(dú)自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；
●交通安全:  過馬路要當(dāng)心，不在馬路上玩耍。
提示詞：electricity(n. 電)
注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；
2．請(qǐng)不耍逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；
4. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Dear David,
Glad to see you e-mail.our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it.It is dangerous to play with fire,for it may couse terrible accidents.we should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides,we are not allowed to swim alone,especially in deely rivers or lakes.If we really want to,we must go to the swim pool with our parents or teachers.What’s more,follwing traffic rules is also very important.Everyone should watch out when crossing the road.And our school warn us not play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safty comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei

試題分析：這是一篇書信，要注意格式。認(rèn)真閱讀材料不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。本文時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作過程中注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。注意運(yùn)用連詞是語意連貫，具有邏輯性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇文章采用了大量的短語和句式，為文章增色不少。比如: It is dangerous to play with fire,for it may couse terrible accidents“玩火很危險(xiǎn)，因?yàn)樗�很容易引起危險(xiǎn)的事故”。What’s more“另外”； make sure“確�！薄Ｔ趯W(xué)習(xí)中要注意總結(jié)，將所學(xué)局勢(shì)和短語運(yùn)用到寫作當(dāng)中去。