Question

2013年我國新一屆領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人給我們勾畫出我們?nèi)�民族的美好藍圖------“中國夢”。2014年是實現(xiàn)“中國夢”的開局之年。作為一位即將畢業(yè)的中學(xué)生，你是否也勾畫出了自己的“中國夢”呢？請以MY CHINESE DREAM為題，結(jié)合自己的實際，勾畫一下你自己的“中國夢”。并談?wù)剬崿F(xiàn)自己的“中國夢”的具體途徑。
要    求：短文應(yīng)包括上述所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。
文章長度：約100至120 詞之間。
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Answer 1

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.
I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.
To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:come true實現(xiàn)，成為現(xiàn)實；talk about談?wù)撃呈拢籲ot only……but also……不但……而且……；from now on從現(xiàn)在開始；as much as差不多；so that以便，以至于；等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。