Question

假定你叫張強(qiáng)，是北京陽(yáng)光中學(xué)(Beijing Sunshine Secondary Schoo1)的一名初二學(xué)生。上星期天你從報(bào)上看到觀鳥(niǎo)俱樂(lè)部(the Birdwatching Club)的招聘廣告。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封簡(jiǎn)短的應(yīng)聘信，介紹自己的情況(見(jiàn)下表)，表示愿意為俱樂(lè)部做一些工作，并請(qǐng)俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。

注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．詞數(shù)80左右。
Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday．Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club．
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Best wishes，
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club.
I’m a 15-year-old student in Grade 8 at Beijing Sunshine secondary school. My favourite subjects are P.E. and science. I’m very interested in travelling and playing basketball, and I’m quite healthy. I’m also an animal lover, so I love birds and nature very much. Last year I wrote a report on the endangered animals for our school newspaper.
I think it is very important for me to do something to protect birds.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010-8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.
Best wishes，

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)聘信。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，準(zhǔn)確地闡明了自己基本愛(ài)好和特長(zhǎng)，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合應(yīng)聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含復(fù)合形容詞的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如a 15-year-old student，I’m very interested in travelling and playing basketball，it is very important for me to do something學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。