Question

7．假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正就"感恩父母，從我做起"這一話題開展大討論．請你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)劄槭裁匆�感恩父母，你通常在業(yè)余時間幫父母做什么，以及你這樣做的感受．
提示詞語：think，bring up，work，make money，support，housework，cook，clean，wash，happy，proud
提示問題：●Why is it important for you to thank parents？
●What do you usually do for them in your spare time？
●How do you feel？
At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：My classmates and I think we should do something for them，because they bring us up我和我的同學(xué)認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該為他們做點什么．因為他們把我們養(yǎng)大．這是一個由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．bring up養(yǎng)大成人．
高分句型二：My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed我的父母為我感到驕傲，因為我可以讓他們感到輕松．be proud of sb．為…感到驕傲，自豪，這是一個由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．My classmates and I think we should do something for them，because they bring us up（高分句型一）．They not only work hard to make money but also look after us carefully（為什么要感恩父母）．
     To thank my parents，I always take some actions．First of all，I usually help my parents do some housework in my spare time．For example：help them clean the floor，wash the dishes on weekends and help them cook breakfast and so on．（我們的具體做法）
     My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed（高分句型二）．I feel very happy too．（作者的感受）．

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