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11．上周，你們班舉行了一場(chǎng)"初中生使用微信的利與弊"的主題班會(huì)，同學(xué)們各抒己見．班長(zhǎng)針對(duì)同學(xué)們的不同意見，做了以下記錄．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容，以"The opinion of using WeChat"為題寫一篇英語短文，說明使用微信的利弊并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ�不少�?0字．

利	弊
1．提供交流的平臺(tái)	1．過度沉溺，影響學(xué)習(xí)
2．認(rèn)識(shí)更多的朋友	2．交友不慎，容易受騙
3．學(xué)習(xí)更多的東西	3．長(zhǎng)期玩耍，影響視力

要求：
1．文章必須包括所提示的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要直譯．
2．開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：platform （平臺(tái)），affect （影響），trick （欺騙），eyesight （視力）
Last week，we had a discussion about using WeChat．Here are the results．Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool．It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends．Besides，they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat．
However，some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it．And they may be tricked by strange net friends．Last but not least，it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time．
In my opinion，we shouldn't use WeChat for too long and make sure that don't use it when we are studying．In addition，we shouldn't add strangers casually or meet net friends without our parents'permission．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"The opinion of using WeChat"為題寫一篇英語短文，說明使用微信的利弊并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1利：提供交流的平臺(tái)；認(rèn)識(shí)更多的朋友；學(xué)習(xí)更多的東西
2弊；過度沉溺，影響學(xué)習(xí)；交友不慎，容易受騙；長(zhǎng)期玩耍，影響視力
3你的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
make friends交朋友
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth  花時(shí)間做某事
last but not least 最后也是最重要的
make sure 確定
in addition 另外
【高分句型】
1．However，some students think①WeChat will affect  their study ②if they spend too much time using it．
①think 后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．spend+時(shí)間+doing sth  花時(shí)間做某事
2．①In my opinion，we shouldn't use WeChat for too long and make sure②that don't use it③when we are studying．
①in my opinion 依我看來，做插入語，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)
②that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為make sure的賓語．
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
3．①In addition，we shouldn't add strangers casually or meet net friends ②without our parents'permission．
①in addition 另外
②without 介詞，沒有…后跟名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．

解答 Last week，we had a discussion about using WeChat．Here are the results．
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool．It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends．Besides，they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat．（提供交流的平臺(tái)；認(rèn)識(shí)更多的朋友；學(xué)習(xí)更多的東西）
   However，some students think WeChat will affect  their study if they spend too much time using it．【高分句型】And they may be tricked  by strange net friends．Last but not least，it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time．（過度沉溺，影響學(xué)習(xí)；交友不慎，容易受騙；長(zhǎng)期玩耍，影響視力）
    In my opinion，we shouldn't use WeChat for too long and make sure that don't use it when we are studying【高分句型】．In addition，we shouldn't add strangers casually or meet net friends without our parents'permission．【高分句型】（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)同一件事情，人們往往有不同的看法，即正反兩種觀點(diǎn)．在寫作時(shí)，常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫作格式一般是：提出問題→兩種不同觀點(diǎn)→對(duì)兩種不同觀點(diǎn)的論據(jù)（理由）逐項(xiàng)作對(duì)比．如果要求說出自己的觀點(diǎn)，可在結(jié)尾段加上自己的觀點(diǎn)并簡(jiǎn)要說明理由，最好不要重復(fù)前面的理由．
考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)．考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢．