Question

書面表達(dá)

于老師給大家一個(gè)機(jī)會寫一封信給她提提建議。假設(shè)你是于老師的學(xué)生，給她寫一封信。例如上課錄音機(jī)（recorder）的聲音小、上課接電話、作業(yè)多、到辦公室找不到老師等等。

Dear Miss Yu,

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Miss Yu,

I am glad to have the chance to tell you how we students feel about you. We are having a hard time in and after school.

Would you mind turning up your recorder? It’s too low for me to hear clearly. I sit in the back of the classroom, so it’s not very clear. What’s more, could you please not answer the phone on class? We don’t want to waste our time. And would you mind not giving us too much homework after school. At last, would you please tell us when you will be at your office, so that we can ask you some questions after school?

If you do that, I will think you are a good teacher.

【解析】只是一篇應(yīng)用文體，根據(jù)提示給老師寫信提建議，在寫作過程中，注意了書信格式以及提供的信息，運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)知識，would you mind doing/not doing…?以及could you please do/not do sth?等提建議的表達(dá)方式，語句通順，符合邏輯。